Dennis is in bed asleep and the camera is zooming out from his face, suddenly Dennis bolts up and we see he is sweating and we realise that what we saw of Dennis and Jamie at the park was a flashback dream he was having. Dennis gets himself up and takes himself to the kitchen where he tries to quietly take out a carton of apple juice. Typically because he is trying to be quiet the shelf in the door where the apple juice was falls out and he drops his cup behind him then appears a woman.
Woman: Dennis what is that noise
Dennis: Mum you frightened the life out of me
Ashleigh: Oh yeah and the noise you are making down here didn't do the same to me huh? Flipping heck Dennis i thought we had burglars
Dennis: Sorry
Ashleigh: What are you doing up anyway?
Dennis: Couldn't sleep
Ashleigh: Doesn't have anything to do with something you are planning to do to a boy named Jamie does it?
Dennis: What? *looks scared*
Ashleigh: I saw his name on your computer, and the phonecall i heard some of that too, I put the two together
Dennis: Oh
At this point we get a flash back of the earlier phone call but this time we hear both sides
dennis: and we're gunna get him soo good man
Jayden: What about paying for all this?
dennis: don't worry about that you just make the call
Jayden: You sure he doesn't know? He gave me a right funny look earlier
dennis: no he doesn't know about it and I'd like it to stay that way, ya hear me?
Jayden: And what about Mason?
Dennis: what about him?
Jayden: If he finds out we are in BIG trouble Dennis
Dennis: like I care
Jayden: Actually I bet you could take him on no problem
dennis: you know it man!
Jayden: What if the kid gets hurt though?
Dennis: maybe miss watts can take care of that side of things
Jayden: She really doesn't like you does she?
dennis: you know maybe she has the hotts for me
Jayden: *laughs* *sarcastic tone*Yeah maybe
dennis: I'm a good looking guy you know, why wouldn't she?
Jayden: Would you shag her?
Dennis: no way on this earth that is sick, you're a sick bastard!
Jayden: I got to go i am off out for a pizza with me dad
Dennis: yeah no worries man catch you later, don't forget make the call, later bro.
Jayden: Sure thing
Now the scene cuts back to Dennis and his mum
Ashleigh: I'm not going to stop you, and i am not going to make you tell me what it is you are planning for this boy either, but i would like you to think long and hard about this, if what you are doing is wrong i suggest you call it off right now...you are my son and you are also an adult now Denny I trust you will do the right thing. Night son
Dennis: Night mum
Friday, 20 August 2010
Part 9
Dennis and Jayden have met in a back ally in town
Dennis: Jayden, we have trouble
Jayden: What?
Dennis: My mum heard the phone call, and she has seen stuff on the computer, she knows we have something going down with Jamie
Jayden: Does she know what?
Dennis: no NO!
Jayden: So what is the problem? We can still do this
Dennis: She gave me that bull about how she trusts me to do the right thing
Jayden: This is right, he has to know, he just has to
Dennis: I know man, god damn it why do parents screw things up
Jayden: It is what they are put on this earth to do, only thing they are good for if you ask me, but the question is do we break the rules or not?
Will they go ahead with their plans for Jamie? Find out soon
Dennis: Jayden, we have trouble
Jayden: What?
Dennis: My mum heard the phone call, and she has seen stuff on the computer, she knows we have something going down with Jamie
Jayden: Does she know what?
Dennis: no NO!
Jayden: So what is the problem? We can still do this
Dennis: She gave me that bull about how she trusts me to do the right thing
Jayden: This is right, he has to know, he just has to
Dennis: I know man, god damn it why do parents screw things up
Jayden: It is what they are put on this earth to do, only thing they are good for if you ask me, but the question is do we break the rules or not?
Will they go ahead with their plans for Jamie? Find out soon
Part 10
Dennis and Jayden are still in the back ally
Jayden: So how is this going down man? You with me? or not?
Dennis: We break the rules K?
Jayden: *Nods*
Dennis: You go and get the goods, i will go and get the money and i will call you at 3 make sure things are going as planned ok?
Jayden: Alright man, listen where are you getting the money from?
Dennis: My mum has some put away from emergancies
Jayden: Dude tell me you are not serious? She is already too involved without taking her money too
Dennis: Trust me i can pay this back before she even knows it is gone
Jayden: You better do
Dennis: Trust me
Jayden: 'ite man! 3 o clock
Jayden: So how is this going down man? You with me? or not?
Dennis: We break the rules K?
Jayden: *Nods*
Dennis: You go and get the goods, i will go and get the money and i will call you at 3 make sure things are going as planned ok?
Jayden: Alright man, listen where are you getting the money from?
Dennis: My mum has some put away from emergancies
Jayden: Dude tell me you are not serious? She is already too involved without taking her money too
Dennis: Trust me i can pay this back before she even knows it is gone
Jayden: You better do
Dennis: Trust me
Jayden: 'ite man! 3 o clock
Part 11
(The scene starts looking at Dennis' watch, it's 14:59 he is thinking this is the logest minute ever)
Dennis: GRRRRR COME ON!!!
The digital watch changes to 15:00
Dennis: FINALLY!!
He goes through his phone and stops at Jayden's name and presses call
Dennis: Jay it's me
Jayden: Bang on time, what was you watch watching again?
Dennis: Yes, now shut up, tell me is it done? Are we on?
Jayden: The pigeon has landed
Dennis: Eagle...it's the eagle has landed
Jayden: What ever man
They hang up and Dennis leaves the house
Dennis: GRRRRR COME ON!!!
The digital watch changes to 15:00
Dennis: FINALLY!!
He goes through his phone and stops at Jayden's name and presses call
Dennis: Jay it's me
Jayden: Bang on time, what was you watch watching again?
Dennis: Yes, now shut up, tell me is it done? Are we on?
Jayden: The pigeon has landed
Dennis: Eagle...it's the eagle has landed
Jayden: What ever man
They hang up and Dennis leaves the house
Part 12
Dennis is sat in the local cafe with Jamie
Dennis: How you been?
Jamie: Fine, my dad is being an idiot though
Dennis: Oh yea how come
Just as Jamie is about to respond Dennis looks at his watch and moves his legs up and down with frustration
Jamie: Brooke is the golden child right now because she didn't want to come here and is kicking up the biggest fuss ever
Dennis: Oh right
Jamie: I mean come on, i have supported dad through this move, the thing with my mum and my uncle, everything and he acts like i do not even exist
Dennis: *grunts*
Jamie: D? Are you ok? You seem...distracted
*pause*
Dennis: Huh? what? sorry man i guess i have stuff on my mind right now
Jamie: Talk to me
Dennis: Nah, us english lads don't really like to talk about our problems, we leave that to the women
We see Jayden outside from a distance he gives Dennis a nod and the scene cuts to Jayden talking to an unknown person in a hoody
Jayden: Right he knows we are here, so now we just wait for our cue
Unknown person: *nods*
scene cuts back to Dennis and Jamie
Dennis: Jamie, I got you here for a reason
Jamie: *looks concearned* Okay
Dennis: We did some reasearch....
Jamie: We?
Dennis: Me and Jayden
Jamie: I see....well what are you on about
Dennis gives Jayden a quick nod and we see him walking over, we still can't see who he is with, he walks in quietly
Dennis: We found someone for you
Dennis nods in the direction of Jayden and the unknown person, the unknown person pulls down their hood to reveal a girl standing there and the scene shows Jamie's face with a shocked expression on it then cuts back to the girl and by her side is a young boy
Girl: Hello Jamie
Dennis: How you been?
Jamie: Fine, my dad is being an idiot though
Dennis: Oh yea how come
Just as Jamie is about to respond Dennis looks at his watch and moves his legs up and down with frustration
Jamie: Brooke is the golden child right now because she didn't want to come here and is kicking up the biggest fuss ever
Dennis: Oh right
Jamie: I mean come on, i have supported dad through this move, the thing with my mum and my uncle, everything and he acts like i do not even exist
Dennis: *grunts*
Jamie: D? Are you ok? You seem...distracted
*pause*
Dennis: Huh? what? sorry man i guess i have stuff on my mind right now
Jamie: Talk to me
Dennis: Nah, us english lads don't really like to talk about our problems, we leave that to the women
We see Jayden outside from a distance he gives Dennis a nod and the scene cuts to Jayden talking to an unknown person in a hoody
Jayden: Right he knows we are here, so now we just wait for our cue
Unknown person: *nods*
scene cuts back to Dennis and Jamie
Dennis: Jamie, I got you here for a reason
Jamie: *looks concearned* Okay
Dennis: We did some reasearch....
Jamie: We?
Dennis: Me and Jayden
Jamie: I see....well what are you on about
Dennis gives Jayden a quick nod and we see him walking over, we still can't see who he is with, he walks in quietly
Dennis: We found someone for you
Dennis nods in the direction of Jayden and the unknown person, the unknown person pulls down their hood to reveal a girl standing there and the scene shows Jamie's face with a shocked expression on it then cuts back to the girl and by her side is a young boy
Girl: Hello Jamie
Part 13
Jordan is sitting on a bed in a hotel room hugging Tommy who is in his jammies and watching tv, Jordan seems distracted from all that is happening in the room around her. She begins to have flashbacks of how she got here.
Flashback one: Jordan is on the computer looking at friends re-united, she types a message on the forum.
"Hi, my name is Jordan Reynolds, I am 18 years old and i had a relationship a few years ago with Jamie Mason. Infact so much of a relationship that we was engaged for a year before i ended it for a high school crush on a teacher. I would like to find Jamie, I know he moved house because he wasn't at his old place when i tried to find him. I am hoping someone on here knows where he is."
Tommy: Are you ok?
Jordan: Sure buddy, it's your bedtime soon little man
Tommy: I don't wanna go
Jordan: You have half an hour, let me put your dvd on and you can go watch it in your bed
Tommy: Okay
Flashback two: Jordan recieves a message from Dennis
"Hi, I think i know the guy you spoke about, he is now living in England, Message me back if you still want to find him"
Flashback one: Jordan is on the computer looking at friends re-united, she types a message on the forum.
"Hi, my name is Jordan Reynolds, I am 18 years old and i had a relationship a few years ago with Jamie Mason. Infact so much of a relationship that we was engaged for a year before i ended it for a high school crush on a teacher. I would like to find Jamie, I know he moved house because he wasn't at his old place when i tried to find him. I am hoping someone on here knows where he is."
Tommy: Are you ok?
Jordan: Sure buddy, it's your bedtime soon little man
Tommy: I don't wanna go
Jordan: You have half an hour, let me put your dvd on and you can go watch it in your bed
Tommy: Okay
Flashback two: Jordan recieves a message from Dennis
"Hi, I think i know the guy you spoke about, he is now living in England, Message me back if you still want to find him"
Part 14
(Back in the room where Jordan and Tommy are) Tommy is watching his dvds on their portable dvd player and he is laughing at them, Jordan looks over at him and smiles. And the flash backs continue
Flashback three: Jordan replies to Dennis' email
"Hello there Deniboy18
Thank you for taking the time to respond to my search for Jamie, I am indeed intrested in finding him, I do hope it is the correct one, England seems a bit far for him to have moved to
Look foward to your response
All the best
J"
Flashback four: Dennis has responded again
J,
Please call me Dennis, I am pretty sure it is the correct one, he moved here from New York with his father and sister Brooke when his dad got a teaching job here.
If this is the guy you seek i can pay for you to travel over and stay in a hotel for as long as you need.
Dennis"
Flash back five: Jordan sends another message
"Sounds like him alright, he did have a sister called Brooke, spoke about her but i only met her once as she was at boarding school.
Thank you for the kind offer, but i can not accept that, and even if i could things are not that simple, I have a 4 year old little boy.
J"
Back in the room
Jordan: Ok little man bed, you can still watch your dvds but i'm turning the light out and you are laying down trying to sleep
Tommy: Ok night moma
Flashback 6: Dennis has sent another answer
"Don't be daft, you can accept it, and besides i love kids, i had a little brother who i loved alot, but he died. Is the boy Jamie's?"
Jordan responds
"Honestly Dennis i really couldn't tell you, I slept with so many men at the time my Tommy was concieved I have no idea, which is why i NEED to find Jamie. Sorry to hear about your brother"
Dennis responds again
"That is fine, it was a few years ago now, infact same year as when you had your son. Tommy is such a cute name, I hope you accept my offer and bring him over would love to meet the little guy."
Jordan replies
"I hope you do not take this the wrong way but you are who you say you are, aren't you? Not some weirdo who wants my kid?"
Dennis replies
"No offence taken, below is a picture of myself, and no i do not want Tommy, i responded before you even said you had him...
Jordan replies
"Nice picture here is mine.
I will take you up on the offer, it is the only one i have and i do desperately need to find Jamie."
Dennis replies
"Great I will sort you out a flight and book it, i will mail you the details as soon as i get something, i will also book you into a hotel just around the corner from me, my friend Jayden will meet you at the airport, leave Jamie to me"
Jordan replies
"Thank you, for everything"
Two days later Jordan recieves a reply from Dennis
Jordan,
i have booked you a flight for Monday 5th April 2010 at 10am your time to arrive here at 9pm our time, i have not booked a return as you do not know how long you need.
As for hotels i know someone who works there, i have a room booked for a week at the travel lodge, i spoke to the guy i know who works there and he can up your stay and put it on the tab i have set up for you which i will pay when you leave. If i do not hear from you before i look foward to seeing you on the 5th
D
Flashback three: Jordan replies to Dennis' email
"Hello there Deniboy18
Thank you for taking the time to respond to my search for Jamie, I am indeed intrested in finding him, I do hope it is the correct one, England seems a bit far for him to have moved to
Look foward to your response
All the best
J"
Flashback four: Dennis has responded again
J,
Please call me Dennis, I am pretty sure it is the correct one, he moved here from New York with his father and sister Brooke when his dad got a teaching job here.
If this is the guy you seek i can pay for you to travel over and stay in a hotel for as long as you need.
Dennis"
Flash back five: Jordan sends another message
"Sounds like him alright, he did have a sister called Brooke, spoke about her but i only met her once as she was at boarding school.
Thank you for the kind offer, but i can not accept that, and even if i could things are not that simple, I have a 4 year old little boy.
J"
Back in the room
Jordan: Ok little man bed, you can still watch your dvds but i'm turning the light out and you are laying down trying to sleep
Tommy: Ok night moma
Flashback 6: Dennis has sent another answer
"Don't be daft, you can accept it, and besides i love kids, i had a little brother who i loved alot, but he died. Is the boy Jamie's?"
Jordan responds
"Honestly Dennis i really couldn't tell you, I slept with so many men at the time my Tommy was concieved I have no idea, which is why i NEED to find Jamie. Sorry to hear about your brother"
Dennis responds again
"That is fine, it was a few years ago now, infact same year as when you had your son. Tommy is such a cute name, I hope you accept my offer and bring him over would love to meet the little guy."
Jordan replies
"I hope you do not take this the wrong way but you are who you say you are, aren't you? Not some weirdo who wants my kid?"
Dennis replies
"No offence taken, below is a picture of myself, and no i do not want Tommy, i responded before you even said you had him...
Jordan replies
"Nice picture here is mine.
I will take you up on the offer, it is the only one i have and i do desperately need to find Jamie."
Dennis replies
"Great I will sort you out a flight and book it, i will mail you the details as soon as i get something, i will also book you into a hotel just around the corner from me, my friend Jayden will meet you at the airport, leave Jamie to me"
Jordan replies
"Thank you, for everything"
Two days later Jordan recieves a reply from Dennis
Jordan,
i have booked you a flight for Monday 5th April 2010 at 10am your time to arrive here at 9pm our time, i have not booked a return as you do not know how long you need.
As for hotels i know someone who works there, i have a room booked for a week at the travel lodge, i spoke to the guy i know who works there and he can up your stay and put it on the tab i have set up for you which i will pay when you leave. If i do not hear from you before i look foward to seeing you on the 5th
D
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